Hi Mike, I'm reading through with fresh eyes. I like the improved clarity of the vision; it makes more sense I think for a reader unfamiliar with the RGV. A couple of comments on the "Federal and state governmental officials and most organizations providing technical assistance to producers are dominated by an organic/regenerative philosophy. There are only about 30,000 farm workers. They are allowed to join a union and are eligible for health insurance. " SB Comments: Drop "most" so less redundant. On workers' right to organize, maybe add paid sicks days and holidays.