Profile shoba Dewey Location: Jakarta, Indonesia Last activity: on 19/05/2019 Joined: on 25/02/2019 Design quotient Research 0pt Idea 37pt Evaluation 0pt Collaboration 23pt Total 60pt Recent contributions (1) Contribution list A funny and tender tale about a child's search for her father a DADDY on the loose A funny and tender tale about a child's search for her father 14 1 shoba Dewey Updated on 19:30, Apr 11, 2019 Recent comments (3) View all link shoba commented on Can you guess what I see? (revised) 20:36, Apr 11, 2019 Hi Xin Li, I like this. It reminds me of 'Brown Bear, Brown Bear, what do you see', which I read to my preschoolers. They just can't wait to turn the page to see what's next and I think this story will have the same positive effect. link shoba commented on What Babies Do 19:42, Apr 11, 2019 Hi Marla, great to see your manuscript here. Love this sweet story of what babies do and the rhymes. Good luck. link shoba commented on a DADDY on the loose 18:53, Apr 11, 2019 Thank you, Itika, for your feedback. I'll try to make revisions in whatever little time there's left before the deadline.