What a great suggestion for the book title! I like that a lot and will also see if I can incorporate the 'grocery time!', 'bath time!' phrases into the text further as well. I'm glad you appreciate the small difference between 'reading with' and 'reading to', that felt very important to me. I've gone through your manuscript a couple of times and honestly can't think of much to improve it. The one thing that does come to mind is finding ways to incorporate the local Philadelphia scene into the pages, I noted you are planning to do that with your images and I feel that is perfect! All the best with this challenge!!
Thanks Itika Gupta for the connection. Marty lapointe-malchik great minds think alike! I like the repetition embedded throughout the book and how each page emphasizes books in a range of ways to the reader. I really love how you chose names for characters that could be representative of the focus community!