I love learning that Dada means grandfather in Urdu. All of the senses are beautifully depicted on this special walk in the city. Including the scripts is a nice way of noticing shapes that a young child would find interesting and definitely notice on a walk with a special grown up. Best of luck with your writing life and this challenge!
Uplifting message in your submission. I loved what you chose to have Daya notice around her. I love her sense of belonging as well as her sense of individuality. Fun singidy, singidy, singidy song repetition! Good luck moving forward.
It's great that readers/listeners will get to spend time with a main character who is active and surrounded with love in an urban setting. The title feels like an irresistible introduction. I can see kids wanting to read more about Little Man after reading this one, too. Nice repetition and word choice throughout! Good luck moving forward in this amazing challenge.