Hello! I added a stanza to The Beauty of Earth with a suggestion that it should be more personal. Additions of warmth of sun and moon shining on love indicate the connection between parent and child. Thank for the encouragement to edit!
Hi Itika - I am currently in the Navajo Nation and will be without internet service until the weekend. The Beauty of Earth and my other manuscripts will have to wait for edits until I get back online. Thank you for your comment and I'll work on making it more engaging and personal!