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Dear Itika Gupta  ,

Thank you so much for the detailed feedback! I'm thinking of perhaps having the speech that is in quotation marks be in speech bubbles, and cutting out the text for "said the panda...", "said the star..." etc. I'll work on trimming down the redundancies as well. Will try and post another draft tomorrow, and think about ways to include vocabulary (one yellow star.. two fuzzy ears... etc).

Thank you so much Virginia Brackett  ! I'll work on another draft tomorrow to try and cut more/change some out for Tier 1 vocabulary. Thank you for taking time to read!

Thank you Ashanti! Hoping to be able to tell the complete story in 250 words too:) I like your stories as well - especially the Toddler Daylight Delight one!