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Hannah commented on Before the Sun Sets

It's always best to stay true to your vision. Best wishes with the competition!

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Hannah commented on Hop On Board!

Perhaps they are going to a relative's block party or maybe at a block they recently moved from? If so maybe hint at this from the beginning?

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Hannah commented on Hop On Board!

Hi Roseanne Frank , I enjoyed Hop On Board! Transportation theme books are ever-popular with toddlers and I love the sounds and interactions you've added into this one.

I love ending with a block party! Parties are always exciting. However, I wonder why they needed to take a bus to go to a block party. Usually block parties happen within a short walking distance. Is there another ending that would feel equally satisfying? Perhaps a street fair further down the line? Maybe you could research events that happen on Broad Street in Philly or nearby?

I love the energy of this story, and a child isn't likely to have any logical issues with the destination. I think it would even stronger if the adult reading it wouldn't have any potential logical hang ups!

All best! Hannah