First Step Fracture Service
Helping health care systems take the first step to connecting fractures and osteoporosis.
Profile
Location: 대한민국 경기도 평택시
Research
0pt
Idea
151pt
Evaluation
0pt
Collaboration
163pt
Total
314pt
Helping health care systems take the first step to connecting fractures and osteoporosis.
Bringing Hope Efficacy and Resilience to Osteoporosis Patients
Let’s get the right message to the right people at the right time.
I like your vision for additional details to flesh out the reality and stereotype. Looking forward to future versions!
Taylor, I really liked the concept behind Sketch #1, but the meaning wasn't clear to me from the illustration. I didn't get that an activist was transmitting information to a journalist and I didn't notice the taped-over mouth until after I read your explanation. The background image is perhaps a missed opportunity to add meaning -- instead of a picture of trees which doesn't help provide context, maybe imagery of a war-torn country and/or protests and of journalists/newspapers/news websites. Hope that helps.
Sketch 2 hold a lot of promise as well. I wonder if you could combine some of the elements from the two sketches... maybe instead of a person loudly speaking have them quietly/covertly talking, overlay the encryption key between the two people (instead of having it look like dialog) and then have the other person be the more overt loudspeaker. Hope that makes sense.
I like the direction this is heading! Good luck with your submissions!
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