Anna, this is such a great read. The rhyming is so fun (what a great rhyme structure!) and I love how you capture Aasha's spirit (and Oba's, too, for that matter). I can picture this entire adventure quite well as the pair romps and chases through the neighborhood (any city kid can totally relate to that!), and especially love the funny, frenetic climax (plunges! lunges! reaches! screeches!) followed by the sweet resolution at the calm, cozy library. LOVE.