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Mr.Philly is Fun

Gives a wonderful trip about the fun in philly. .

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Hey there what's up

Sit back listen

Why I am happy as a dove

Wrapped in the heart of Pennsylvania

Is this wonderful city with people

As friendly as angels from up above.


Mama told me once

In all the places she has been

In all the cities she has seen

This is the only one

Blessed with a touch of love.


Black,white,native and Hispanic

All types of friendly people

Come together and have fun

Big,short,small and tall

All shapes and sizes mix

With each other

And enjoy the ball.


Zoom into the zoos

Mama told me once,this is the city

With the oldest zoos around

Hip hop on the trains

If you are too tired to walk.


Keep your eyes on the elephant cats

Rhinos,lions, cheetahs and bears

Hip hop on the camel's back

Bounce back and forth

Upon the zebra's tracks

Some of the cuttiest and funniest

Animals are there.


Whether it's sunshine or rain

There's always a special way

Kids can come out and play

Grab a pretzel or eat at a buffet

Now you see why I'm happy as a dove

Because I'm one of the lucky ones

To be wrapped in Mr.Philly

And his brotherly love.


Describe the intended vision for your early childhood book manuscript in 1-2 sentences

Well, it's a fun and playful flavor of Philly.which will keep the kids happy and excited.

Share your suggested book title

Thankful for Mr.Philly

PLEASE USE THE VERSION OF THIS QUESTION AT THE TOP OF THE SUBMISSION FORM: Share a draft of your manuscript (250 word limit, not including title).

Hey there what's up Sit back listen Why I am happy as a dove Wrapped in the heart of Pennsylvania Is this wonderful city with people As friendly as angels from up above. Mama told me once In all the places she has been In all the cities she has seen This is the only one Blessed with a touch of love. Black,white,native and Hispanic All types of friendly people Come together and have fun Big,short,small and tall All shapes and sizes mix With each other And enjoy the ball. Zoom into the zoos Mama told me once,this is the city With the oldest zoos around Hip hop on the trains If you are too tired to walk. Keep your eyes on the elephant cats Rhinos,lions, cheetahs and bears Hip hop on the camel's back Bounce back and forth Upon the zebra's tracks Some of the cuttiest and funniest Animals are there. Whether it's sunshine or rain There's always a special way Kids can come out and play Grab a pretzel or eat at a buffet Now you see why I'm happy as a dove Mama say "thank God Because I'm one of the lucky ones To be wrapped in Mr.Philly And his brotherly love".

How has this book been informed by early childhood language development research and evidence? (response minimum 250 Characters)

As a poet,and writer of different forms of writings This serve as a fun and joyful read..

Please describe any familiarity you may have with Philadelphia and its residents? (optional question)

No familiarity,with residents

How have you crafted this manuscript to resonate with and/or reflect the experiences of those living in urban contexts? (optional question)

Lots of people forget, the art of being humble Kids should be taught at a tender age, The manuscript paints this art of humbleness. Kids eventually show a positive change.

Location: Country

St.lucia

Location: State or Department

Caribbean

Location: City

Castries

Website URL (optional question)

Creative writer,searching for opportunities

Tell us more about you / your team

They are a group of creative writers from St.Lucia Hard working and very devoted to all forms of writing.

Provide an example visual identity for a look and feel you might like to achieve. ( (optional question, 3-5 visuals)

I have published small booklets of poetry.

Multiple Choice - Have you been previously published (online, self-published, and print included)?

  • No

If yes, please list titles and publications.

Poems and Prose Juice of love Touch of Class Art of Gold Tears of Love

Do you have an agent?

  • No

How did you hear about the Challenge? (optional question)

  • Someone in my network (word of mouth)

What best describes you? (optional question)

  • I am/we are creatives, writers, or artists

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I like that you have included some visuals. Also to make it more memorable, please add more fun things to it and a song would be good.

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